I Need some help to improve my eBay listings

[Promo-Man]

Ok, here is the deal. I am starting to sale on eBay and know that some of you also sale or buy on eBay and I would like some feedback on what I can do to improve my listings and my Me Page.
Click Here is a link to my Me Page
Thank you

[Morrigoon]

Heh, at first I thought you were asking for "feedback", LOL.

ALWAYS put a picture in the listing. I don't buy ANYTHING I can't see. Be very specific about things like shipping, people want to know EXACTLY what something's going to cost them. Put several pictures of whatever you're selling. One or two wide shots from different angles (such as front and back, sides too if relevant), and some detail shots (good details as well as flaws). Use as many keywords as you can in the listing lest people miss it (for example, I once bought a turkey-size serving tray for $2 because it was listed as "tray with castle picture", rather than tray with castle that looks like disney picture") The castle on the tray looks like SB Castle on an island, it's awesome and they could have gotten way more for it if they'd put a keyword in there that had grabbed the right people.

That's all I can think of

[Promo-Man]

What I am trying to do here is to have a few of you to take a look at what I have said in my eBay ME page and my listings then please give me your thoughts on how I might improve my listings and ME page. I am not looking for general information but what would you do to improve the listing if it was yours or if you were looking to buy.
My items are new and will be customized with the customers imprint so yes I do show a sample of what the product looks like.

A Thank you in advance for this help and yes you may PM me if you don’t want to post here.