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    You write that on the bathroom
    trying to make me die inside
    while I sit inside my small cacoon
    waiting to unfold beside the soft flowers of tomorrow

    My heart says yes
    I tell myself no
    Trying to make me die inside
    you write this poem once more

    Hold me near and dear and make me yours
    my heart is growing colder
    I think I'm getting sober
    as this life comes to a close

    While I write this poem i sit at home
    thinking about what I lost
    My friends my home and love
    all because of some white gold

    I'm growing older by the second
    running from the law
    I wish this was over all over and I could walk out that door

    I'm no longer free in the country
    for I am trapped in this life of misery
    trying to find the real me
    hiding and dying while you write this on the bathroom wall



    I feel poetic tonight Night all

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    Wow, thats really pretty. Great job

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    That's amazing.
    I love poems.

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    Very pretty.. makes me think deep though...

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    That's pretty. I like it.


    Here's my very funny poem.

    VMK ( didn't see that coming did you? ) is obsessive, this is true.
    Everyday we go online to find something new.
    During this year of a million dreams, Disney is starting a celebration.
    As this continues 365 days, its a party across the nation.

    But beyond any dream, beyond any thought - there's only one thing to say.
    "All I want during this year of dreams, is something rare in VMK!
    Forget the thought, forget the dreams - I want something rare!
    I don't care about lifetime passes or trips where Disney pays my airfare."

    You know its true - that's what we want - why did everyone go on eBay?
    To buy something? No. Sell something? No. Why? TO GET A CODE FOR VMK!
    Your laughing now, aren't you? Well, its true - you must know.
    I never thought about those other prizes - all I want is a code!

    I love Disney, I love the parks - but I really love VMK.
    Think about it: when you go to the parks, you go to VMK Central anyway!
    VMK is obsessive, you know its true - all you want is something new.
    Disney is starting a celebration, and its really sweeping the nation.

    During this year of a million dreams, 365 days.
    VMK has hit us with its mesmerizing rays.
    "We love VMK. We love VMK. Is what we'll all chant.
    How will we stop this madness? The truth is simple: we can't.



    Yes - I need help.


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    LOL WDW the poet


    You see me lying on the floor
    Lying in a puddle of blood
    You caused it you know it
    Caused all the pain I harbor inside my darkened empty heart

    The punching the hitting it all must stop
    Before that last pin of mercy is dropped
    You caused it you know
    Caused all the misery you have today

    You hit the wall instead of me but we know what will happen
    You've hit her to but it's all the same I'm the one you come to
    You caused it you know
    Caused all the blood lying on the floor

    Their here now as you question the law
    They want to know about the noise about the screaming our neighbors hear each night
    You caused it you know
    Caused all the memorys burned in my mind



    * note this a poem a wrote nothing I wrote has ever happened to me
    Last edited by Vmk_Addict; 11-25-2006 at 07:50 AM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Vmk_Addict View Post
    LOL WDW the poet


    You see me lying on the floor
    Lying there is a puddle of blood
    You caused it you know it
    Caused all the pain I harbor inside my darkened empty heart

    The punching the hitting it all must stop
    Before that last pin of mercy is dropped on the floor
    You caused it you know
    Caused all the misery you have today

    You hit the instead of me but we know what will happen
    You've hit her to but it's all the same I'm the one you come to
    You caused it you know
    Caused all the blood lying on the floor

    Their here now as you question the law
    They want to know about the noise about the screaming our neighbors hear each night
    You caused it you know
    Caused all the memorys burned in my mind



    * note this a poem a wrote nothing I wrote has ever happened to me
    wow - very pretty! Amazing poem - Vmk_Addict - the TRUE poet


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    nice poetry
    mine is corny hiakus that get me at least b's in school
    example:
    My name is walrus
    i play Virtual Magic
    Kingdom with good friends

    this is off the top of my head so don't laugh
    Angels Fan, born and raised.
    Come on you Galaxy.


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    Quote Originally Posted by zeppelindude View Post
    nice poetry
    mine is corny hiakus that get me at least b's in school
    example:
    My name is walrus
    i play Virtual Magic
    Kingdom with good friends

    this is off the top of my head so don't laugh
    LOL it IS a hiaku tho

    Mine is based on VMK too - read it


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    uhg I'll try this is just random;


    Be who you want to be;
    Not what they want you to be.
    Be a pretty butterfly;
    dance through the midnight sky.
    Be a rainbow;
    shine through sunlight.
    Be yourself;
    that's who you always should.

    here's a little quote thing I've got a picture to go with heh.

    Even small; can conquer all.



    **me and my friend jordyn got so bored we took my 2, 4, 6 & 10 year old sisters' 'little people' things; stacked them together, put a chicken on top and i shouted EVEN SMALL; CAN CONQUER ALL! My friend likes to brag about being taller than almost everybody in our homeroom. we're so random I thought about makin a poem about it but It'd be bad rofl.

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    Quote Originally Posted by skateprincesariel View Post
    uhg I'll try this is just random;


    Be who you want to be;
    Not what they want you to be.
    Be a pretty butterfly;
    dance through the midnight sky.
    Be a rainbow;
    shine through sunlight.
    Be yourself;
    that's who you always should.

    here's a little quote thing I've got a picture to go with heh.

    Even small; can conquer all.



    **me and my friend jordyn got so bored we took my 2, 4, 6 & 10 year old sisters' 'little people' things; stacked them together, put a chicken on top and i shouted EVEN SMALL; CAN CONQUER ALL! My friend likes to brag about being taller than almost everybody in our homeroom. we're so random I thought about makin a poem about it but It'd be bad rofl.
    LOL - you have that many sisters? Wow - and their ages - your house must be a mad house.


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    Quote Originally Posted by WDWGirl View Post
    LOL - you have that many sisters? Wow - and their ages - your house must be a mad house.
    Now add 1 stupid brother 1 year older, 5 years dumber (I swear LOL). Mad house indeed, vmk is my get away; imagine parties! ah
    i've got some poems from like 3rd grade, I like keeping my awesome work =]
    Let me get it..brb muahaha

    Edit: Sorry I can't find it, When I last cleaned my room I placed it with my Designs (story for another time). But I did come across this in my computer files (I liked it so much i made a graphic for it);


    Cry with me,
    I'll cry with you,
    Tears will fall,
    Hearts will break,
    Though still together,
    Now and forever,
    Best friends forever.


    That I wrote about 2 years ago.
    Last edited by skateprincesariel; 11-24-2006 at 10:48 PM. Reason: typo

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    Quote Originally Posted by skateprincesariel View Post
    Now add 1 stupid brother 1 year old, 5 years dumber (I swear LOL). Mad house indeed, vmk is my get away; imagine parties! ah
    i've got some poems from like 3rd grade, I like keeping my awesome work =]
    Let me get it..brb muahaha


    What do u mean 1 stupid brother 1 year old, 5 years dumber? lol I don't get it - then again... maybe I read it wrong or something.. lol


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    Quote Originally Posted by WDWGirl View Post
    LOL it IS a hiaku tho

    Mine is based on VMK too - read it
    i know i was reading it and i was thinking of that subject while writing poem (well that and trying to beat difficult lever on Dance dance revolution)
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    Quote Originally Posted by WDWGirl View Post


    What do u mean 1 stupid brother 1 year old, 5 years dumber? lol I don't get it - then again... maybe I read it wrong or something.. lol
    Typo, should be 1 year older, LET ME FIX THAT..HEH

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