My Disneyland 55th Re-Dedication Speech

[The Forbidden Eye]

"Fifty-Five years ago, one man had a dream. A dream that there will be a place where both the parents and their children can have fun together. Disneyland was that dream. It's here that we can relive the fond memories of our past and can savior both the challenges and promises of the future. Disneyland is dedicated to the ideals, the dreams and the hard facts that have created America. With the hope that it'll be a source of joy and inspiration to all the world. It has been Fifty-Five years and Disneyland has continued to grow, and remain a source of joy and inspiration to all the world. Today, we pay tribute to a man, whos legacy now lives on in Walt Disney World in Florida, Tokyo Disneyland in Japan, Disneyland Paris in France, Hong Kong Disneyland in China and here in California, where the magic and the dream began."

I know this speech has some flaws in it but this is my initial draft.

[CinderellaStory]

"Fifty-Five years ago, one man had a dream. A dream that there will be a place where parents and their children can have fun together. Disneyland was that dream. It's here that we can relive the fond memories of our past and can savor both the challenges and promises of the future. Disneyland is dedicated to the ideals, the dreams, and the hard facts that have created America. With the hope that it will be a source of joy and inspiration to all the world. It has been Fifty-Five years and Disneyland has continued to grow, and remain a source of joy and inspiration to all the world. Today, we pay tribute to a man, whose legacy now lives on in Walt Disney World in Florida, Tokyo Disneyland in Japan, Disneyland Paris in France, Hong Kong Disneyland in China and here in California, where the magic and the dream began."

I know this speech has some flaws in it but this is my initial draft.

Fixed, at least good enough for me

[The Forbidden Eye]

Fixed, at least good enough for me

LOL. I thought for a minute you twisted my intial draft into something else.

Thanks for the being the editor lol.

[Barbaraann]

I think it looks pretty good.

[The Forbidden Eye]

I also would like to point out that the final draft is either going to be the same length or longer if I could think of something else.

[aashee]

It would sound awesome with the Indiana Jones theme in the background.

[RonNYC]

Interesting. Where are you planning to deliver your speech?

[The Forbidden Eye]

Interesting. Where are you planning to deliver your speech?

If MC has a meet on July 17th, i'll be sure to deliver the speech then.

[aashee]

If MC has a meet on July 17th, i'll be sure to deliver the speech then.

I can't wait. Please let us know if this is happening. I hope someone gets it on video.

[Barbaraann]

I will be at Disneyland on July 17th.

[Joshnyah]

I would also like to make plans to be there.

[The Forbidden Eye]

I can't wait. Please let us know if this is happening. I hope someone gets it on video.

I will be at Disneyland on July 17th.

I would also like to make plans to be there.

Thanks guys!

Update on the 55th speech:

Still working on it. But I'm going to need some help. If you have any speech addition suggestions, please PM me.

[wumbology]

If this were a Facebook post, I would "like" it.

But keep proofreading. Don't wanna make it too choppy.

[Quacky4Donald]

I would add in something about the upcoming park in Shanghai.

[aashee]

Thanks guys!

Update on the 55th speech:

Still working on it. But I'm going to need some help. If you have any speech addition suggestions, please PM me.

Do you want it in PMs to keep it a secret? I'd like a little credit if I add to this wonderful speech.