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    And the Ghost will follow you home (silly Poem) and more Ghost themed stuff

    And the Ghost will follow you home
    And everywhere you go he will roam

    He follows me to the fridge to get a drink
    And even to places you may not think
    Like watching me from the bathroom sink

    My life was like his own private reality show
    For everywhere I went the ghost would go
    To work where I’m sure he must be bored
    I’ve pretended he isn’t there but he doesn’t like to be ignored

    He haunts me every single hour
    Laughing and pointing while I take a shower
    He likes pranks –like steal the phone
    He looks like a green glowing dwarfish gnome

    He follows me shopping to the mall
    Playing whimsical pranks like making me fall
    With bags flying through the air- not funny at all

    I’ve asked him nicely and been polite
    I’ve yelled and screamed laid out my plight
    But for some stupid reason he will not leave.
    Oh and by the way his name is Steve.

    I tried to take him back one day
    But the stupid ghost refused to stay
    I think my ghost might be gay

    He is an extremely ghastly apparition
    Leaving the house in a messy condition
    He Never—ever shuts the doors
    And throws wild parties with ghost whores

    It was pure torture he just wouldn’t leave
    A constant Nightmare by the name of Steve
    If you can’t beat him join em—I finally said
    So now we play games like find Steve’s severed ghost head.

    Now that I’ve befriended him—its much more fun
    We joke and laugh and drink a ton
    The place is still a mess but I don’t care
    You see I’m starting to think Steve isn’t really there.

    BAC 05/30/2008


    “Come on pick one already….”
    ……………
    “Oh what is taking him so damn long…Just pick one”
    ……………..
    “They are all the same just pick one so we don’t have to spend all day in this damn line”……………….
    “Seriously just pick the next one that gets off the ride… There –oh no—come on guy ---there are people in line behind you” …….. “Arghhh --I can’t take it anymore---this is ridiculous…..Come on dude…..There that right now the line is moving……Oh come on---pick one already---yeah you skinny tall freak you look like a skeleton”

    An Impatient ghost in line for picking who they get to follow home.

    BAC 05/30/2008

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    Re: And the Ghost will follow you home (silly Poem) and more Ghost themed stuff

    Attack of the huge font! I'm more scared of it than of the ghost! No, kidding. Nice job on the poem. I definitely enjoyed it. (Let us know if you're interested in serious critique; I've learned the hard way that when I'm online, offering people respectful but truthful suggestions for improvement is often a bad idea unless it's asked for.)


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    Re: And the Ghost will follow you home (silly Poem) and more Ghost themed stuff

    Funny but it hurts to read such a huge font. Why did you think was the ghost gay? Because he watched you in the shower?


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    Re: And the Ghost will follow you home (silly Poem) and more Ghost themed stuff

    Not concerned about serious criticism--this was just totally random nonsense fluff --that hit me while listening to Attraction music online...this afternoon... Thought--how can i survive the last hour of the week......I'll write a stupid poem based on a Ghost following me line from the ride--(quick and dirty without much thought) ---just killing time. --but thought some people might get a kick out of it.

    Feel free to add your own Ghost following you home stories or poems or creepy tales ------And you have to love the scary large font..

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    Re: And the Ghost will follow you home (silly Poem) and more Ghost themed stuff

    Like the poem, but the size of the font drained it out a bit. Thanks for sharing!
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    Re: And the Ghost will follow you home (silly Poem) and more Ghost themed stuff

    Yeah there was the "shower thing" and the ---"long ghostly glances during dinner"-----but no seriously ---it rhymed

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