Wow again, DuffyDaisuki! For one thing, I didn't even know there was a story. When I click on the Sweet Duffy banner on the official site, it's broken and just reloads the main page. So, this story is new to me. Thank you for translating.
I really like the art style of minimal lines, and only faint color for everything but Duffy and Shellie May. I also appreciate that they keep Duffy and Shellie May from expressing feelings for each other. Both of them are content to bring love and joy to others, not themselves. It's also very nice to see continuity between all of the previous Sweet Duffy events, by having Duffy "train" Shellie May on how to do things...since he's done them before. Oh, and I love how they use the Hello From Cape Cod winter coats in the artwork to further tie things together. You could even use the coats over the Sweet Duffy costumes if you really wanted to, just like the artwork!
Anyway, thanks for staying up so late and doing all of this. Sleep well, and have "Sweet Duffy" dreams, LOL.