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    Tell me if this makes any sense, please, Thank You

    And look up, my heart stops at the sight of her. i run after to ask her but cowardly run past her. I stop, I look back but she is not there. gone forever, maybe.

    she will forever be in my dreams.
    until we meet again... my love.

    Does anybody get this uh... story/poem thingy? Oh and do you like it?

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    Re: Tell me if this makes any sense, please, Thank You

    I look up, my heart stops at the site of her.
    I run after her to ask,
    but cowardly run past.
    I stop
    I look back, but she is not there.
    Gone forever,
    Perhaps.

    She will forever be in my dreams.
    Until we meet again..........my love.



    Not bad. I just made a few changes (left out a few words, and changed maybe to perhaps).
    Is it for a school project?

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    Re: Tell me if this makes any sense, please, Thank You

    oh... there you go! Thank You I didnt know the format for this.
    No it's not for school.

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    Re: Tell me if this makes any sense, please, Thank You

    I don't know if my format is the correct one, but it seemed to work.

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    Re: Tell me if this makes any sense, please, Thank You

    Well it looks better than it was the first time I wrote it lol.

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    Re: Tell me if this makes any sense, please, Thank You

    I like Samsma's format.

    Sounds like you've been hit by the thunderbolt. Godfather reference.

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    Re: Tell me if this makes any sense, please, Thank You

    Yep I like Samsma's better too. Hmm... would it be ok if I posted some uh... quotes/ aphorisms here? Would you all read them or could you all care less?

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    Re: Tell me if this makes any sense, please, Thank You

    I don't get it.
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    Re: Tell me if this makes any sense, please, Thank You

    Sounds like you're smittn with someone. Bite the bullet and ask her out...NOW...before it's too late!


    Good poem too!

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    Re: Tell me if this makes any sense, please, Thank You

    Quote Originally Posted by Degaa View Post
    Yep I like Samsma's better too. Hmm... would it be ok if I posted some uh... quotes/ aphorisms here? Would you all read them or could you all care less?
    Post away. I'll read them.

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    Aww omg that was so cute....Who is this girl and what is her Name??LOL

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    Re: Tell me if this makes any sense, please, Thank You

    Quote Originally Posted by ShelbiGirl31 View Post
    Aww omg that was so cute....Who is this girl and what is her Name??LOL
    LOL the problem with asking her is that I only saw her once and it was, oddly, at Universal Studios. I never got to even talk to her and so im afraid all that can help me find her now is love...

    ps:sorry if this post makes you feel like barfing. lol
    Last edited by Degaa; 06-17-2007 at 09:43 PM. Reason: I wanted to make it perfect

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    Re: Tell me if this makes any sense, please, Thank You

    ..and wow I didnt think people would ever find this post... or even respond lol

    oh and my poem thingy for taday is:

    I found the most beautiful slipper, it must belong to the most beautiful girl, my love true. And guess what my sweetheart the slipper fits you.
    ...yeah its bad but I tried lol
    Last edited by Degaa; 06-17-2007 at 09:24 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Degaa View Post
    LOL the problem with asking her is that I only saw her once and it was, oddly, at Universal Studios. I never got to even talk to her and so im afraid all that can help me find her now is love...

    ps:sorry if this post makes you feel like barfing. lol






    Hmm....That is like the song "Your Beautiful" Gosh Makes me sad lol....I wander why u liked her????LOL Was she really pretty or sumthin??hehe
    No barfing included.....

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    Re: Tell me if this makes any sense, please, Thank You

    Quote Originally Posted by Shelbigirl15 View Post
    Hmm....That is like the song "Your Beautiful" Gosh Makes me sad lol....I wander why u liked her????LOL Was she really pretty or sumthin??hehe
    No barfing included.....
    lol she was... ok there is no word for it! lol

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